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The part-time cartoonist said, “Hug! There is such a famous line in the “Beautiful Girl of Light”: “What can be done! Anything can be achieved!”. He listened, but he thought: “When you are grown up, you can’t do anything and you can’t do anything.” This made him realize: “Oh, I want to become a dark-right society.” The people over there! To become the end of the beast! Ah, ah, ah, ah!” On Sunday morning, the mood became very dark. This is what only adults can appreciate. Embrace! The method of the beautiful girl of light. .
(.https://twitter.com/poppoyakiya/status/1023352150158585856).
The cartoonist, Shintaro, said that it is best for writers to think about what kind of readers they want to please. If the reader of the comments is the group you want to please, it is best to change according to what the other party said; but if not, then you don’t have to take the other person’s words seriously. .
(.https://twitter.com/tokutaro/status/1023209398674415617).
Recently, some online novels use a lot of onomatopoeia instead of scene descriptions, causing controversy. The light novelist Fujiwara Yu accused the critics of saying that there are so many novels in the world that are not so written, and that you are not going to buy them. It was also after the reposting of Fujiwara’s remarks that the above tweet was sent. .
The cartoonist said that there are some descriptions that have been decided when designing the character. .
For example, if you want to draw a character that is not dead, then you will decide to join the “seriously hurt by ordinary people, such as being cut off.” If there is no such description, it is not a role of the undead body”, but only an “empty and undead role.” .
If it’s a short piece of work, basically it’s a whole piece of it that repeats this “detailed description when designing a character.” Because the short length is limited, there is no need to arrange extra plots. .
よしむら said that occasionally there will be some young writers who say that they want to increase the depth of their characters, like a supporting role to increase the supporting role, and want to ambush the line, wasting a limited amount of ink in the short story. If it is to subvert the above-mentioned “established description”-based works, or the author who has the strength to draw the branch line while ensuring the main line, then there is no problem; but some people are patronizing these details, and they are ruined. .
In addition, the predecessors of the cartoons often said: “To be short-lived as a serial 1st painting”, some people really “draw the short story into the first serial of serials.” I warned that the two are not the same, and that you really paint the first time is not like it. Although it is a good thing to leave the volts or the afterglow, the short story is an independent work after all, and the work must be completed to a certain extent. .
(.https://twitter.com/yoshimurakana/status/1023317207135137793).
Network novelist Takayama Ritu sees male writers suffering from no female fans. As a female writer who created a male-oriented work, she summed up what kind of male-to-work works would be welcomed by women:
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- There are many male characters. .
- The heroine is not annoying, and the dress is not exposed. .
- The male lead is charismatic and won’t wag the tail of the heroine. .
- Don’t sell meat, even if there are pornographic descriptions. .
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Takayama believes that as long as the above points can be achieved, there will naturally be female fans following. The rest will be written according to the male way of writing. Female fans are not directed at the interaction between male characters. .
Turning the above several items can also constitute the characteristics of a female-oriented work that is popular with men. .
Takayama said that the description of a man’s appearance as Jack Sue, or the interaction between a bunch of male characters, does not attract female readers. However, if the heroes speak heroic style, have powerful, inclusive and intellectual, and help the weak, they will want to continue reading.
Takayama also recommended a plot that can bring female fans to the work, that is, let the male lead help young men or teenagers. Because if the protagonist only helps women, it seems to have ulterior motives. The protagonists who do not distinguish between men, women and children, and who help each other equally, will be fascinated by thousands of female fans. .
Takayama said that although the male often asked the protagonist to help the passer-by grandfather to the work, he almost never saw the protagonist’s ability to help the young man who could grab his limelight. If the protagonist helps such a man, at a certain time, he can arrange for the protagonist to get into trouble. The man who came to the rescue started the blood. It is a pity that male writers rarely write this. .
(.https://twitter.com/Lizreel_spindle).
Say good not to pursue the interaction of male characters…