John UM
The huge robotic theme of light novels is not easy to write, which has become a consensus between writers and readers. In . 一年半前的新声, there are two writers who have discussed the difficulty of writing a robot in a light novel, and how to overcome these difficulties. .
But the day before yesterday, the author of the most successful huge robot novel “All Metal Frenzy”, He Dongzhao, drank a lot of wine at home, and accidentally sent a tweet: “People always say that it is difficult to write a robotic theme in a light novel. I think that the writer who is not thinking is looking for an excuse.”
Fortunately, the rooftops have been crowded with fans recently, or else, how many writers who have fallen into the sand before the difficulties of robotic light novels, because this tweet has to jump off the building. .
If you say it, the water that has been poured out, although He Dong knows his own words, he can only blow the leather off his head. .
He said that in the aspect of robot’s appearance description, the novel certainly won’t win the image, so many people feel that the novel has a disadvantage. However, although the “All Metal Frenzy” recently added a luxurious mech illustrator at the end of the film, at the beginning of the publication, the description of the robot’s appearance was very embarrassing. .
For example, the novel’s initial description of the assaulting squadron is only a few words like “the ninja of the book”, “slim and white” and “the most dangerous art in the world”. .
And for M9, the novel only wrote that it is “grey”, “small hands and feet” and “head like a fighter pilot helmet”. .
So He Dong summed up a conclusion: “This drunk is a secret to teach you new guys who write robotic light novels. In fact, the robotic design is not important at all. What you need to decide first is the color of the robot.” .
Red? White? Blue? No problem. The important thing is that you have to create a token, like the “red AS”, which can describe the robot in less than five words. .
(.https://twitter.com/gatosyoji).
More than just robots, descriptions in entertainment novels are harder to imagine than many readers. Of course, too little description will not work, too much will slow down the rhythm and affect the reading experience. How to pinpoint the scale of description is a proposition that many writers are exploring all their lives. .
The famous light novel writer Yuichiro shared his experience from predecessors. A long time ago, the editor-in-chief of a book department once recommended him: “Hey teacher, you must exercise your writing, you have to write pornography. After all, people can’t say anything about the stocks, and there is no way to fool the customs!”
榊 I also think that this is true. The description of pornography is more emotional than the theory. After getting the basic writing by theory, it is a good way to use eroticism to exercise the sensibility of the article. .
(.https://twitter.com/ichiro_sakaki/status/1011593866930245636).
Light novelist Aro Benjing once wrote adult game scripts. He also believes that pornography is a test of a person’s writing. Those who are not yellow, even if they write sex insertion, are only the report of the mating; the yellow person, even if only the woman in the tram next to the tram is squatting on his shoulder, can be shocked. .
(.https://twitter.com/aramotokei/status/1011596772362412034).
So, why is it so difficult to describe pornography? Adult cartoonist May Rain believes that we should leave aside the general writing and structural design capabilities. Adult works, whether it is articles or comics, have some elements that are basically fixed; and if these elements must be met, Writers must also write new ideas. So from this perspective, if a writer does not have the strength, it is difficult to write pornography. .
(.https://twitter.com/takaflo/status/1011614200479662081).
Critics and light novelist Qiandao Xian said that entertainment novels require that the description be controlled to a minimum. The functional novels, like pure literature, are more elaborate, and the readers are more welcome. This type of literature is very rare.
Therefore, the former island believes that if you want to elaborate the description and style, and do not want to write a noble culture, want to find a job in the world of mass culture, then you should write pornography. The reason why he often discusses pornography lately is also a very important reason. .
Especially the kind of love works, as well as short stories of genius, it is simply in the competition who can use more eccentric, whimsical, unprecedented rhetoric to describe sex. Qiandao believes that when he writes a scene of sex, he writes the same scene of the brain when writing battle scenes and scene descriptions. .
And, best of all, pornography has a very clear evaluation criteria: whether the reader can be hard and can be used. It is a very rare experience to use a clear standard to judge that the description is not sufficiently detailed. .
(.https://twitter.com/MAEZIMAS).
However, even if you temper your own description level and become a well-known writer, it does not mean that everything can be done smoothly. .
The economist Sakai Fenggui has published many academic and popular science works, and his sales volume is gratifying. He has also won some awards. One of them, “Appropriate”, has also published a simplified Chinese version. The Douban score is quite good. .
However, he is already a best-selling author, but he has an annoyance: his children have no interest in his favorite musicals, only keen to play games. One day, Sakai couldn’t bear it. He shouted at the children: “The game is rubbish! The musical is the best!”
His child listened, wowed out and cried, complaining: “I obviously like the game so much!” “I don’t respect Nintendo too much!”
Sakai feels incomprehensible: Why do people hear someone else crying out of the game? Is such a person just his own child? .
Sakamoto sent the matter to Twitter, which led to a slap in the face, so he had to delete the tweet. .
The original author of the comics saw a screenshot of the netizen in July. He couldn’t help but sigh: If the person wants to let the child like the drama, he should not talk to the child about the topic of drama at all. Imposing a child will only make the child easily resent, which is the child’s nature. In July, although he liked Sima Liao Taro, whom his father loved to read, it was also that he took it from his father’s bookshelf and liked it. His father did not recommend it to him at all. .
Conversely, only once, the parents of July united and interfered with his hobby: because he read comics all day in July, his parents hid all the comics in the bookcase. Needless to say, this move is effective. Their son has since become an extreme comic house, so that the original author of the comic book was chosen as his lifelong career. Parents’ interference with children’s hobbies is so terrible. .
July said that the otaku is not the one you can let a person go to be a person, nor is it a person who wants to be a person. So, in turn, the otaku is not the same as if you let a person not be a bad person, nor can it be improper for a person to think wrong. .
(.https://twitter.com/JULY_MIRROR).
Light novelist Ito Ayumi said that if you don’t want your child to play games, you can easily let them get tired of it by saying “The game is super fun, Dad is coming to play together”. .
(.https://twitter.com/itou_hiro/status/1012031160413614080)